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Script for my TV ad

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If you need professional advice on your masterpiece then our tutors will give you the guidance that you need.
We have facilities that will help you fully reach your potential with professional studios, professional recording equipment and all the instruments you could ever need.
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Shot list 1,2,3

Shot List 2 Shot List 3 Shot List 1

Shooting Schedule for TV AD

Actors roles list and Props and Costumes List

Taylor's Props and Costumes List

WWW & EBI

WWW-
I think the shots were really good and the editing fit the genre of the song. So overall I feel it was a success for the genre. The overlapping shots of Jocelin worked really well. The eye shot looked nice because it was abstract and stood out which worked really well. The shot where Jocelin is in a fuzzy TV edit looks interesting because it is different edit style. I think the location of the stage worked well, specially the cage bit because the cage bars were completely out of focus so the audience were focusing on Jocelin. I think the shots filmed in Jocelin's studio worked really well with the rap bits because it fits with the rap genre being in a studio.


EBI-
I think more shots of a woman presence would have added a better fitting narrative to the video and the song.I also think I could have had a variety of more shots. If I had more time I would of  filmed more shots for example of a woman whose face would not be seen, only her hair or other facial features to create an enigma. I would like to have one more performance of Jocelin possibly performing the song down a street because its urban and that fits the genre. I would have liked to re-edit a bit where the lip synching seems out of synch. I don't think all of it should have been in black & white, I thought it looked a bit pretentious and it lost its appeal after the rough draft.

I was added to a survey to see who had the best music video in the year. I didn't win

Location update;
The stage is being used for a play which takes place on nights and they have left the staging so I have decided to use the staging to make the area look more interesting.
here is a shot of the staging with Jocelin standing in it, as you can see it looks like city lights, the reason i choose to do this is because its much more interesting then a plain background and makes him seem like a small artist with big issues in a big industry of music.




We also had permission to use Jocelin's studio to perform which will show that he makes his own music and doesn't get any professional help which will make him seem more impressive that he creates all his own music.

Animatic idea 1
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Btec l3 Unit 3 Research Grid